Wednesday, October 24, 2007

Riley's poem

The Ocean
By Riley
age:8

The ocean, the ocean
Oh how I love the ocean
It's waves and it's
Ripples calm me.
The ocean, the ocean,
Oh how I love the ocean
It's soft sound of water
Delights me.
The ocean, the ocean
Oh how I love the ocean.

1 comment:

lisaquing said...

Oooh, the rhythm of the poem is reminiscent of waves! Effective! Excellent writing, Riley!